歌詞の翻訳を考えています。

新曲・英題「Response」

新曲の歌詞に、英語の意訳を載せようと考えています。（歌自体は日本語）
しかし、学生時代から英語は苦手だったので、文法は勿論、口語でこの言い方はありなのか？など、感覚的な部分もよくわかりません。

・文法、スペル
・口語っぽい文章（ライトな言い方？）
・ワードチョイス

等、アドバイスしてあげてもいいよ～という奇特な方がいらっしゃいましたら、ぜひともコメントor SNSにて教えてくださいm(__)m

特にどなたもいらっしゃらなかったら、自分で悩みながら推敲していきます！(笑)

歌詞（2023.9.12時点）

“Response”

You are beautiful up close
I can't bear to look at you through the monitor
Sweat glistened on your shiny skin,
so released the shutter in my eyes

Great view of the front center
Can't allow someone to be between us
Steamed hall　Crushed calls
Grating　Annoying

Send the eyes to me
Signal to me with the finger
Slay after a turn, on my position
You held out a hand,
not in front of me
In my way, In my way!

Gimme your response, please
Your eyes
Gimme your response, please
Only for me
Gimme your response, please
Don't look at the other ones
I am the person that loves you the most

Flocking to "Good Morning"
The proof of love is a speed game
Even if we fool around with emojis,
it oozes out, desire

Send your like to me
Love me on flick
Stop in the middle of swipe, on my post
I looked in your "like" list,
You don't have any of my stuff, do you?

Gimme your reply, please
Your words
Gimme your like, please
Only for me
Gimme your reply, please
Ignore the other ones
I am the person that sends you love words the most

Gimme your love, please
Gotta be you
Gimme your love, please
Can’t be anyone else
Gimme your love, please
I am just like the rest of them, 
even though I know

Gimme your response, please
Your love
Gimme your response, please
Only for me
Gimme your response, please
Don't look at the other ones
I am the person that loves you the most

日本語の先行公開も悩んでいます。
この際、英訳とともに先に出してしまう方がいいんでしょうか…？(笑)
些細なことでもご意見お待ちしております。
X(エックス) → @MisumiTohri