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Hi

I went to theater today.
Because I watch a musical " Catch me if you can".
That was amazing!!
I have seen "Catch me if you can" movie.
Leonardo DiCaprio played a main character.
He and Tom Hanks are sooo cool!
I love this movie.
So I wanted to watch the musical as well.
It was glamorous, and the costumes and cast were very cute!!
It was a Broadway musical after all.
It makes me happy!!!!

ブロードウェイミュージカルって最高です！
最初から最後まできらびやか！！！
海外旅行へ行くときはミュージカルを鑑賞するのがマイルールです♪

Corrected sentence

Hi,

I went to the theater today to watch the musical "Catch Me If You Can." I
t was amazing!
I've seen the movie version with Leonardo DiCaprio.
He and Tom Hanks are so cool!
I love that movie.
So, I really wanted to see the musical.
It was glamorous, with cute costumes and a great cast!
After all, it’s a Broadway musical.
Musicals always make me happy!

なんだか自分の英文ってややこしくしてたり、無駄があったり。
もっとシンプルなんだなと思うのですが
シンプルにすると繋ぎのofとかtoとかwithとかわからないんですよね〜。

もっとお勉強だ！！！！！