英検writing 10/10

Topic: Is marriage becoming less important today than it was in the past?

I think that marriage is becoming less important today than it was in the past.
I have two reasons to support my opinion. Firstly, the number of working women increasing and they may concentrate on their work.If they decide to marriage, they loss enough time to work.The decision whether they get married or not should consider by themselves.
secondly, the thought is spread these days that we must not force to get married and have a child.The Stereotype which we have to get married is out of date and must be disappointed.
for these reason, I believe Everyone don't mind whether we got married or not today and do not think this is important for us.