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IELTS、英検1級ライティング
Is enough being done to stop the illegal trade of endangered species?
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The illegal trade of endangered species has been regarded as a multifaceted global issue, warranting urgent attention and concerted efforts from international authorities, governments and civil society.
Despite continuous strides to solve this grave problem, the current measures fall short of effectively curbing this nefarious practice.
Primarily, the enforcement of existing laws remains inconsistent and often inadequate, allowing criminal organisations to exploit regulatory loopholes and evade prosecution.
Specifically, as is often the case with financial viewpoints, the lack of sufficient finances allocated to wildlife agencies impedes their capacity to monitor and combat illicit activities effectively.
Furthermore, the popularity of products made from endangered species has been persistent especially among indigenous tribes owing to various factors, including cultural beliefs and medicinal claims. Addressing this trend entails comprehensive awareness campaigns, education initiatives and alternative livelihood chances to reduce reliance on wildlife exploitation.
Collaboration at both national and international levels is imperative to cope with this transnational crime. To put it concretely, both strengthened cooperation among law enforcement agencies and tenacious efforts to dismantle criminal syndicates are indispensable steps towards disrupting illegal wildlife trafficking networks.
In summary, while progress has been made in wrestling with the illicit trade of endangered species, current countermeasures leave a lot to be desired.
A comprehensive approach encompassing strengthened enforcement of laws and international commitment is crucial to safeguarding the world's biodiversity for future generations.
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