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ライティング練習&英語ノート電子化:Do you participate in a loyalty scheme? If so, what do you like or not like about it? If not, why not.

Do you participate in a loyalty scheme? If so, what do you like or not like about it? If not, why not.

There are various loyalty programs in business. I personally have taken part in a point program of DIESEL, an Italian apparel brand, for two years. I personally do not like the point program. This essay will explain why I do not support it so much.

There are several negative aspects of the point program. First, there is an expiration date. Every year, the points I stored last year decrease. This deduction is a tremendous disadvantage for me.Since DIESEL’s products are a bit expensive, I can not afford to buy them regularly. Therefore, I sometimes take advantage of online shopping sites, which provide a cheaper price than DIESEL stores.However, I can not accumulate the points because the site is not operated by DIESEL. Secondly, I sometimes prefer the products, which were released a few years ago. I often purchase them through Mercari where many people sell their old products. Also, I can not earn points.

However, it is true that there are several rare products ready for the avid fun of DIESEL. Some of the products displayed are so artistic, tempting many enthusiasts to go to theDIESEL store to obtain points.

All in all, although I love DIESEL’s products, I utilize online shopping sites, and prefer some older products. It is extremely difficult to accomplish the goal for its special products.Thus, I do not like the point-based loyalty system.

英語のエッセーの書き方について

イントロダクションで、テーマについて展開する内容を書きます。
テーマでこのエッセーの主要な内容が2個の場合、それをパラグラフ1、パラグラフ2として詳細な内容を書きます。

そして、結論で、エッセーのまとめを書きます。イントロダクションの言い換えをするイメージですね。



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