Friday, September 1st, 2023

•I got up at 9:30 a.m. in the morning yesterday and I realized that Canadian basketball team had a game against Brazil as soon as I woke up, so after I went through my morning routine I watched the game. Canada was leading against Brazil in the first half but in the second half, Brazil was making scores more and more and in the last minutes they won from behind. A big upset happened. People say Canada this year is the strongest team in history and great players from Canada in NBA join the team as well. On the other hand, there are nobody playing in NBA in team of Brazil. Basically no one didn’t expect this result, which made me both surprised and pumped up. Also during watching the game I posted a picture of the game to my Instagram story.  As soon as I posted it, my Brazilian friend replied to my story. He likes basketball like me and we have played it together as well. Also he was pleased at this results.

添削後
• I got up at 9:30 a.m. yesterday morning and realized that the Canadian basketball team was playing against Brazil as soon as I woke up. After going through my morning routine, I settled in to watch the game. Canada had a lead against Brazil in the first half, but in the second half, Brazil started scoring more and more, and in the final minutes, they came from behind to win. It was a big upset. People have been saying that this year's Canadian team is the strongest in history, with great NBA players from Canada joining the team. On the other hand, there are no NBA players on the Brazilian team. Basically, no one expected this result, which both surprised and excited me. While watching the game, I also posted a picture of it on my Instagram story. Almost immediately, my Brazilian friend replied to my story. He's a basketball enthusiast like me, and we've played together before. He was also pleased with the unexpected outcome.

•settle in to do to doすることに落ち着く
•score 動詞　得点する
•come from behind to win 逆転して勝つ
•on the other hand それに対して
•surprise 動詞
•excite 動詞
•almost immediately ほぼすぐに
•enthusiast 熱狂者　大ファン
•unexpected 　形容詞　予想していない
•outcome 結果