Improved, right?

Hey there. How's it going? Gentle Gian is here.

About six months ago, I uploaded my voice text on note.
After that, luckily, I could take Alex's coaching, so I felt like comparing my pronunciation and reading skills.

This text is before taking coaching:

And this one is after taking coaching:

I felt something change, but what do you think?
If you leave a comment, I'd be happy.

That's all for today. See you around.