#63 英検３級のライティング添削④
1. 添削前の英文
Q. Which do you like better, watching sports or playing sports?
I like playing sports better than watching sports. I have two reasons. First, I go to a local soccer team. I love playing soccer. Second, I have played many sports other than soccer.（３３）
2. 直したほうがいい箇所（太字）
I like playing sports better than watching sports. I have two reasons. First, Igo to a local soccer team. I love playing soccer.Second, I have played many sports other than soccer.
3. 添削
First, I go to a local soccer team. I love playing soccer. Second, I have played many sports other than soccer.
→ First, I like getting exercise. Second, I like to play sports with my friends.
・「どうしてサッカー教室に通うのか？」と聞かれて「体を動かすのが好き」や「友達と一緒に運動するのが好き」と答えるなら、それがまさに「スポーツを観るよりも実際にプレーするほうが好き」に対する理由であるから、そちらを理由として答えるべきである。
4. 添削後の英文
Q. Which do you like better, watching sports or playing sports?
I like playing sports better than watching sports. I have two reasons. First, I like getting exercise. Second, I like to play sports with my friends.（２６）
5. 参考資料
exercise のコロケーション
「運動をする」は get［｟英｠take］some exerciseが一般的．make は不可．do は目的語が修飾語を伴う場合に可能: do aerobic exercise エアロビクスをする．
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