Noisy Yet Good

The neighborhood is very noisy now. When I listen carefully, It seems that the neighbor family is playing football TV games because I can hear loud voices "Goooooooal!" many times.

It's nice that families crazy about TV games.

■添削前
The neighborhood is very noisy now. When I listen carefully, it seems that the neighbor family is playing football TV games because I hear the loud voice "Goooooooooal!" many times.

It's nice that families are crazy about TV games.

■ チャットGPTからの添削による修正

・because I hear the loud voice "Goooooooooal!" many times. → because I can hear loud voices "Goooooooal!" many times.
細かいけどvoiceは複数形に。
「聞くことができたから」という感じで"can"を使用か。

・【メモ】It seems that 〜
〜のようだ
これは覚えた。

・It's nice that families are crazy about TV games.
この文褒められた。「It's nice that 〜」という表現は、何かが良いことだと述べる際に使われるとのこと。