Saturday, September 16th, 2023

•It was my friend’s birthday party last Saturday. I drunk with my friends at a restaurant for the first time in a while so I spent great time. What’s more, the day before the party I drunk at the birthday party as well, that’s why I had drunk two days in a row. It was really really great weekend. I was very drunk especially day two, last Saturday. On that day, I don’t know why, but I was able to drink alcohol very much, as a result I threw out everything I ate inside of the bus on my way home. That would be unforgettable dark past I can’t tell anyone.

添削後
• Last Saturday was my friend's birthday party, and we hit up a restaurant to celebrate. I drank with my friends for the first time in a while, so I had a fantastic time. What's even crazier is that the night before, I was at another birthday party, and yep, you guessed it—I was drinking there too! So, I ended up having back-to-back nights of partying.
But here's the kicker: On the second night, last Saturday, I don't know why, but I was able to handle way more alcohol than usual. As a result I threw up everything I had eaten inside of the bus on my way home. It's an unforgettable dark past I can't tell anyone about.

Hit up 場所　場所へ行く　hit 活用形で変化なし（hits, hittingのみ）
Celebrate 祝う
You guessed it あなたが思った通り
Party 動詞　パーティーを楽しむ
Back to back 連続して
Here is the kicker 「何よりも大事なのは」「この点が重要だ」
Handle alcohol = drink