英検準一級　writing 8/29

I think it is a good idea for local governments to build tourist sites ,such as theme parks and museum.I have two reasons why I think so.

First,those who visit there for the first time such as foreigner is able to have a chance to know about the city’s culture and history.I believe many people need know about the city in order to those prosperity.

Second,If they build tourist sites,It is a good place for not only visitors but also residents to communicate each other.Because residents those who want to communicate foreigner can easy to carry out this idea.

In this way,I think tourist sites is a positive affect to many people.（113words)

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