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令和6年7月22日sunburn
Make words **bold** which I impressed with.
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Rewrite following sentences. These are written by voice record.
Today I was going to climb Mt. Fuji and as that plan I climbed it and I managed to reach the peak of the mountain. I climbed same mountain two years ago and last year I was not able to do that due to the approach of the typhoon. It’s the first time in two years. I haven’t even climbed a small mountain. At the beginning, I sweated so much that water dropped on the glass of my glasses. However as I elevated the mountain, the temperature decreased and wind become strong. My sweat started dry quickly and I stopped sweating. It took about six hours for climbing up and I am beat now. Go sleep and take enough rest.
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Today, I climbed Mt. Fuji and managed to reach the peak. I climbed the same mountain two years ago, but last year I couldn't due to an approaching typhoon. This is my first climb in two years, and I haven't even climbed a small mountain since then. At the beginning, I sweated so much that water dripped onto my glasses. However, as I ascended, the temperature dropped, and the wind became strong. My sweat dried quickly, and I stopped sweating. It took about six hours to reach the top, and now I'm exhausted. Time to sleep and get some rest.
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