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令和6年7月19日SunLIght

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Rewrite following sentences. These are written by voice record. I live in northern half of Earth, so we are struggling and suffering from a very hot summer. Sun light is so strong and there are much Ultra violet which has enough power to destroy human’s tissues. The reason we should to use sun umbrella is not only avoid much heat but also protecting strong and destructive beam. Therefore, all of you should and need to use such kind of efficient stuffs. Do you wanna kill your own cells? Of course, No.
Eventually, I managed to watch some videos which I saved very before. In that video, I learned the difference between abstracting by purpose and abstracting by existence. For instance, if you have sense of relation among tuna, salmon, shark and something like that, that means you recognize them in the relation of fishes. This is abstracting by existence. However, if you need to make some decisions in business situaiton, you need to abstract purposes, not features. Purpose is the first thing you need to care among every stuffs, because purpose is a root of every plans, goals, and solutions.
I have a golden rule of not ordering bigger size when I have a ramen. This is because I want to avoid too much carbon hydrates. Despite my willingness to do so, I ate bigger size and besides a bit rice with it. it was so good but I got a huge damaged.

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I live in the northern hemisphere, and we are struggling with a very hot summer. The sunlight is so strong, and the ultraviolet rays are powerful enough to damage human tissues. The reason we should use a sun umbrella is not only to avoid the heat but also to protect ourselves from these harmful rays. Therefore, everyone should use such effective items. Do you want to harm your own cells? Of course not.
Eventually, I managed to watch some videos that I had saved earlier. In one of the videos, I learned about the difference between abstracting by purpose and abstracting by existence. For instance, if you understand the relationship among tuna, salmon, and shark, you recognize them as fish. This is abstracting by existence. However, in a business situation, you need to abstract by purpose, not by features. Purpose is the first thing you need to consider because it is the root of every plan, goal, and solution.
I have a golden rule of not ordering a larger size when I have ramen because I want to avoid too many carbohydrates. Despite my intention, I ordered a larger size and even had some rice with it. It was delicious, but I ended up feeling quite uncomfortable.


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