While I Can

I bought a lot of ice cream at convenience store yesterday. It would be too late to buy it in summer because it melts before I get home.

I'm cool.

■添削前
I bought a lot of ice cream at convenience store yesterday. If you will buy them summer, it will be late. Because ice cream melt on my way home.

I’m cool.

■ チャットGPTからの添削による修正

・If you will buy them summer, it will be late. → It would be too late to buy it in summer
「夏に買うと遅い」最初に頭に浮かんでいた文で良かった。失敗。
仮定の話なのでwouldを使っている。

・Because ice cream melt on my way home. → because it melts before I get home.
「帰り道の途中で」ではなく「家に帰る前に」か。なるほど。

・【メモ】melt：溶ける

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タイトルの"While I Can"は「今のうちに」という意味。