English diary 【6th time】

●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Friday. I had finished my job for a week.  
And I could work out in the gym continue two days after a long time.
Recently, clearly goal involved in working out is not,
but I think that I should continue to working out at least 3-4 times a week.
Because Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow are holiday, 
I want to working out at the gym. Next week is golden week,
so I think that I want to do high more quality a job. 
Thank you for reading.  

After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Friday, and I've finished my work for the week. After a long break, I was able to work out at the gym for two days, which felt great. Lately, I haven't had a clear goal related to working out, but I believe I should continue to exercise at least 3-4 times a week. Since tomorrow and the day after are holidays, I plan to go to the gym. Next week is Golden Week, so I aim to do even higher-quality work. Thank you for reading.

Summary of corrections

  1. "continue two days after" corrected to "continue for two days after": This change makes the sentence clearer by indicating the duration of the workout continuation.

  2. "Recently, clearly goal involved in working out is not" corrected to "Lately, I haven't had a clear goal related to working out": This revision improves clarity and flow by rephrasing the sentence to express the lack of a specific fitness goal more clearly.

  3. "but I think that I should continue to working out" corrected to "but I believe I should continue to exercise": This change maintains consistency in verb tense and improves clarity by using "exercise" instead of "working out."

  4. "Tomorrow and tomorrow and tomorrow are holiday" corrected to "Since tomorrow and the day after are holidays": This correction clarifies the reference to the upcoming holidays and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

  5. "I want to working out at the gym" corrected to "I plan to go to the gym": This change maintains consistency in verb tense and improves clarity by using "plan to go" instead of "want to working out."

  6. "Next week is golden week" corrected to "Next week is Golden Week": This revision capitalizes "Golden Week" as it appears to be a proper noun referring to a specific event or holiday.


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