Friday, August 25th, 2023

•I woke up around 10 o’clock, did sunbathing outside and then cleared up my pillows and quilt on my bed.
•I recently add writing my future goals and check the today schedule to my morning routine. As a result, I can understand what to do on that day as well as motivate myself to study English and hours of studying English has been increasing since I started two things.
•It was Friday yesterday so I was very happy and my classmates and teacher looked happy as well. Although we didn’t have any breaks, the last period finished 30 minutes early and we was able to go home early.
•Friday is the day before weekend so I tend to stay up late every Friday. Yesterday as usual, I went to bed after 1 a.m.

添削後
• I woke up around 10 o’clock, sunbathed outside, and then tidied up my pillows and quilt on my bed.
• I've recently added writing my future goals and checking today's schedule to my morning routine. As a result, I can understand what needs to be done on that day and also motivate myself to study English. The hours I spend studying English have been increasing since I started incorporating these two things.
• Yesterday was Friday, so I was very happy, and my classmates and teacher seemed happy as well. Even though we didn't have any breaks, the last period finished 30 minutes early, allowing us to go home early.
• Friday is the day before the weekend, so I tend to stay up late every Friday. As usual, yesterday I went to bed after 1 a.m.

•sunbathe 動詞　日光浴をする
•tidy up 片付ける
•incorporate 〜を取り入れる
•seem 形容詞 〜のように見える
•allow 人　to do 人にto do することを許す
•even though althoughを強調した表現