Thursday, August 24th, 2023

•I woke up at eight thirty in the morning yesterday and started to study English at nine o’clock. Usually, 10a.m. to 11p.m. is the time I talk to my girlfriend on my phone and I tried to call my girlfriend as always but she didn’t pick up the phone so I continue my study.

•Today was the day we finally took the examination but we didn’t again. We are going to take it next Monday but we are not sure if we take it next Monday certainly. In first period we practiced typing and in second period we took a class in elementary how to use word application and practiced typing agin. I have practiced it lately at home and school and I use my laptop for studying English typically so I have hurt on my neck and shoulder recently and my eyes have been tired from using it for so long as well.

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• I woke up at eight thirty in the morning yesterday and started studying English at nine o'clock. Usually, from 10 a.m. to 11 a.m. is the time when I talk to my girlfriend on my phone. I tried calling my girlfriend as usual, but she didn't pick up the phone, so I continued my study.

• Today was the day we were finally supposed to take the examination, but once again, we didn't. We are planning to take it next Monday, but we are not certain if it will indeed happen on that day. During the first period, we practiced typing, and in the second period, we had a class on elementary usage of word processing applications and practiced typing again. Lately, I've been practicing both at home and school, and I typically use my laptop for studying English. As a result, I've recently experienced discomfort in my neck and shoulders, and my eyes have become tired from prolonged use.

•today is the day 〜　今日こそは〜な日である。

•once again 再び、また

•be planning to do ＝be going to

•S be certain that that以下を確信している

•indeed 副詞　確かに　確実に

•on that day 当日に

•have a class = take a class

•usage of  〜の使用法

•processing 処理

•both a and b abどちらとも

•experience　感じる

•discomfort　名詞　不快、痛み

•prolonged 形容詞　長く、長期にわたる

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