Copilotで英文添削

英文添削にChatGPTが使えるという記事をよく目にしますが
私の場合、「新たにアカウントを作るのってめんどくさい」
「月額いくらかな～」
と思って二の足を踏んでいたところ
microsoftで開発したbingAIが目に留まりました。
現在は改良されてcopilot として
パソコンのタスクバー右端のカラフルなマークで表示されていますよね。
私は英検１級の英作文対策、
二次試験対策のエッセイ作りをすべてこれで乗り切ったので
便利さをシェアしたいと思います。

まずは　問題と自分の作ったエッセイを入力します。
そして　Correct grammatical mistakes(errors) and evaluate my essay.
などと入力すると

Copilot　Your essay provides a clear stance on the benefits of social networking services. Here are some corrections and suggestions for improvement:
と返してくれた後

Question: Do the benefits of social networking services outweigh the disadvantages?
Answer: I believe that the benefits of social networking services outweigh their disadvantages for the following reasons. Firstly, social networking allows people to ask for help when they are in trouble. For example, we’ve experienced the Great East Japan Earthquake and a tsunami. Many people were evacuated to the rooftops of buildings. They didn’t have access to a telephone line, but some people tried to ask for help on Twitter. Their appeals spread around the world immediately, and foreigners tried to cheer them up while waiting for rescue. Secondly, people can communicate with others all over the world. You may receive a comment from celebrities by following them on social media. This situation makes people’s lives enjoyable. In conclusion, there are some issues with social media, such as cyberbullying and invasion of privacy, but its disadvantages can be avoided by having net literacy. Therefore, I am confident that the advantages of social networking outweigh its disadvantages.
Evaluation:

• Clarity: Your essay is straightforward and easy to understand. You’ve presented your arguments in a logical order.

• Coherence: The transition between points is smooth, making your essay coherent.

• Grammar and Spelling: There were a few grammatical errors and typos which I have corrected. It’s important to proofread to avoid these mistakes.

• Content: You’ve provided relevant examples to support your argument, which strengthens your essay.

• Conclusion: Your conclusion effectively summarizes your viewpoint and restates the main idea of the essay.

Overall, your essay effectively argues that the benefits of social networking services outweigh the disadvantages, supported by personal experiences and general observations. Remember to maintain net literacy to safeguard against the potential downsides of social media. Great job!

のようにきちんと訂正した文章と評価を返してくれます。
もしどこを変更したか知りたければ
Highlight the corrected places boldly.　
と入力することで

~省略　　such as cyberbullying and invasion of privacy, but its disadvantages can be avoided by having net literacy. Therefore, I am confident that the advantages of social networking outweigh its disadvantages.      ~省略。
のように表示してくれますし
もしcopilotの表現が気に入らなければ

"This situation makes people’s lives enjoyable."
I don't like this expression. Give me synonyms for this sentence.
と入力すると

Certainly! Here are some alternative ways to express that sentiment:

• This situation adds joy to people’s existence.

• Such interactions enhance the pleasure of living.

• This scenario contributes to the delight in people’s daily lives.

• Engaging with celebrities on social media brings excitement into people’s everyday experiences.

• This circumstance infuses enjoyment into people’s routines.

Feel free to choose the one that best fits the tone and style of your essay.

のようにいくつもの文章を提供してくれます。

もっと難しい単語を使いたい、もっとフォーマルな文章にしたい
わかりやすくして、いくつか例を挙げてなど
こちらの要望を入力することできちんと答えてれますし
すべて無料で使えます。

上の文章を見てもわかるように
英検１級対策だからと言って
難しい単語を乱用する必要はありません。
自信をもって話せる言葉で
自分の経験や実生活で知りえた
情報を盛り込んだ文章を作ることが大切だと思います。

この機能なしで私の英検１級対策は不可能でしたので
皆さんもぜひ　使い倒して合格を手にしてください！

補足：こんな記事が出ていました。
＜ソーシャルメディアは「心の健康に害」警告表示義務づけ提言　米国＞
やはりnet literacy は大切なんですね。。。

https://mainichi.jp/articles/20240618/k00/00m/030/002000c