自作短歌のAI評価

歳とりて　見える山川　風までも　揺らす木の葉は　緑鮮やか

若輩に　見えぬ木の葉の　色なれど　歳重ねれば　素の美しき

As I grow older, I see the mountains and rivers more clearly.
Even the wind that shakes the leaves makes them more vividly green.

To the young ones, the leaves may seem plain and dull.
But as I age, I appreciate their natural beauty.

この短歌は、歳を重ねることで見えてくる自然の美しさを感じさせる作品です。作者は、若い頃には気づかなかった山川の風景や木の葉の色彩を、緑鮮やかと評価しています。一方で、風までも揺らす木の葉は、作者の心情の動揺を表しているのかもしれません。歳とりて見えるという言葉には、悔いや寂しさも含まれているのではないでしょうか。この短歌は、歳をとることの喜びと哀しみを繊細に描いた素晴らしい作品だと思います。

This tanka is a work that makes you feel the beauty of nature that becomes visible as you age. The author appreciates the scenery of the mountains and rivers and the colors of the leaves that he did not notice when he was young as vivid green. On the other hand, the leaves that sway even the wind may express the author's emotional turmoil. Does the word "visible as you age" also include regret and loneliness? I think this tanka is a wonderful work that delicately depicts the joy and sorrow of aging.