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英語日記　12/15

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12/17
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日記

I'm in Shimoda right now, on vacation with my Mom and sister. The weather was not very good but it did not dampen our spirits. We are staying in a beautiful ryokan. The food was fantastic!The place is very traditional. I saw geological formations in the area, which were very interesting. I would love to learn more about them. As a working adult, I want to widen my horizon and learn more skills. Being fluent with the English language is one of them. My motivation level is good, although there are low days. I sure would like to be constantly motivated!

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日本語：旅行で下田に来てる！天気が悪くて移動が大変だったけど、料理も美味しくて楽しい〜。地層がいっぱい見れて面白かったけど、知識がないからもっと勉強したいなって思った。学生の時よりも社会人になってからのほうが学びたいことがたくさんある。英語もその一つ。まだやる気に波がある。だけど一つ一つ身にしていきたい。　
英語：I'm in Shimoda on a trip! The weather was bad and it was difficult to move, but the food was delicious and very fun. It was interesting to see so many geological formations, but I didn't know much about it. So I wanted to learn more. There are many more things I want to learn as a working adult than when I was a student. English is one of them. I still have a wave of motivation. However, I would like to learn them one by one.

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訂正された文:
"I'm in Shimoda on a trip! The weather was bad, making it difficult to get around, but the food was delicious and it was a lot of fun. I saw many geological formations, which was interesting, but I felt like I lacked knowledge about them, so I want to study more. As a working adult, I have many more things I want to learn compared to when I was a student, and English is one of them. I still have fluctuations in my motivation, but I want to take them on step by step."

訂正と解説：

  1. "移動が大変だった" → "it was difficult to get around"：より自然な表現です。

  2. "楽しい〜" → "it was a lot of fun"：強調の程度を表現しました。

  3. "地層がいっぱい見れて面白かったけど、知識がないからもっと勉強したいなって思った" → "I saw many geological formations, which was interesting, but I felt like I lacked knowledge about them, so I want to study more."：より詳細な表現に修正しました。また、文の流れをより自然に整えました。

  4. "学生の時よりも社会人になってからのほうが学びたいことがたくさんある" → "As a working adult, I have many more things I want to learn compared to when I was a student"：意図がより明確になるように修正しました。

  5. "まだやる気に波がある" → "I still have fluctuations in my motivation"：「波がある」よりも具体的な表現に修正しました。

  6. "だけど一つ一つ身にしていきたい" → "However, I want to take them on step by step"：より自然な表現に変更しました。

今日の感想

・温泉でポカポカして、タブレットで受講っていういつもと違う環境だったから音声死んでたけど継続できてる～～
・めちゃめちゃポジティブな言い回しになったので、おもしろいな～～って思った！
・日本にめちゃくちゃ詳しい先生だったから、下田としか言ってないのに「うなぎ？」とか聞いてきて普通に焦った。日本に関する知識が圧倒的に足りてない草

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