#1 while running (extreamly personal use)

Hi, guys

my hobby is to train body and always go to gym every week.
as usual when I was running with watching some English video to study, I was inspired with her advice.

you know, it's really important to output what you learn rather than input too.
and I decided to write this blog in English.

so, unfortunately this content is definitely for me and really personal and private, not for you sorry.

but as long as  I published it in my note, I really want to be useful and inspiring for you. I wish.

so then, I rely on Chat GPT who is really helpful and actually help for me in my business.

above sentense is my real draft, it's my real broken and poor English. but I told him to revise and proofread it.
I revieal this process and make you feel the difference with my draft and proper English by Chat GPT.

that's all. and have a nice day. 

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Teacher(Chat-GPT )'s feedback

Hi everyone!

My hobby is training my body, and I go to the gym every week without fail.
As usual, I was running on the treadmill while watching an English video to help me study, when I was inspired by some advice given in the video.

I realized that it's very important to practice using what you learn, instead of just absorbing new information. Because of this, I've decided to write this blog in English.

I must admit, this content is mainly for my own benefit; it is very personal and private, so it might not be for everyone – sorry about that.

However, since I have published it here, I genuinely hope it can be useful and inspiring to you in some way.

To help me with this, I rely on Chat GPT, which has been incredibly helpful, not just for writing this blog, but also in my business.

The paragraph above was my first draft. It wasn't perfect English, but I asked Chat GPT to revise and proofread it to make it better. I wanted to show you the difference between my initial attempt and the final, polished version created with the help of Chat GPT.

That's all for now. Have a nice day!

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Teacher(Chat-GPT )'s comment

I have endeavored to maintain a simple structure and clear language to aid comprehension for English beginners. I've also corrected grammatical errors to present proper English while retaining your original sentiments and experiences.