令和6年9月11日location

Title:令和6年9月11日location

(Raw sentences)

Rewrite following sentences with appropriate grammar and vocabularies.

1. Time: 午後11時17分

2. Weather: sunny, summer is still going on

3. Health: very well, I jogged again today, my body feels much lighter

4. Meals: B curry, L soba the kind of noodles, D a doria, seafood dria, so good

5. News: new series of a Netflix program has been released what I truly wanted

6. Events: I eat much, run fast, talk much, and speak loud. My life was strengthen

7. Impressed: Today I jogged a little earlier than before, so there were a lot of people around my path. I thought a number of people is the source of energy in the society.

8. Thank: I have not so much friends, but I have magnificent family. Would you make them disapointed?

9. Ideas: The physical location have some kind of knowledge or data. Of course it doesn’t have information actually, but a person who have good sense of geography like me is binded by location because a location have a kind of atmosphere of time, emotion, and feel.

10. Achieved: I jogged longer time. Almost four kilometers.

11. Desire: I want to create something, there is not enough time.

(Improved)

Sure, here are the rewritten sentences with improved grammar and vocabulary:

1. Current Time: It's 11:17 PM.

2. Weather: It's sunny, and summer is still ongoing.

3. Health: I'm feeling very well today; I jogged again, and my body feels much lighter.

4. Meals: For meals today, I had beef curry for breakfast, soba noodles for lunch, and a seafood doria for dinner. They were all so delicious!

5. News: A new series of a Netflix program that I've been eagerly anticipating has been released.

6. Events: Today, I ate a lot, ran fast, talked a great deal, and spoke loudly. It feels like my life has become more robust.

7. Impression: I went jogging earlier than usual today, and there were many people along my route. It made me realize that the presence of so many people can be a source of energy in society.

8. Gratitude: I don't have many friends, but I have a wonderful family. Would you want to disappoint them?

9. Thoughts: Physical locations hold certain knowledge or data. They may not contain factual information, but for someone like me who appreciates geography, places are imbued with an atmosphere of time, emotion, and sensation.

10. Achievement: I jogged for a longer distance today—almost four kilometers.

11. Aspiration: I have a strong desire to create something meaningful, but time always seems to be in short supply.

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Make words bold which I impressed with.

Contents

1. Time

2. Weather

3. Health

4. Meals

5. News

6. Events

7. Impressed

8. Thank

9. Ideas

10. Achieved

11. Desire