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Topic：Do you follow any strict diet?
Rewrite following sentences. These are written by voice record. Okay, let's let's get started discuss on the topic So today's topic is the do you follow any strict diet? Yeah, So, yeah, I think everyone. almost of the people want to want to want to reduce reduce their weight or. or some kind of limit limit their calories or calories from the foods and so limit foods like rice bread or something butter Yeah. Yeah. Something like cow carbon hydrate. So. So yeah. Some some people some people might might try to to get started to to move on to the streak very strict diet alike don't. eat don't eat anything in a day or just just drink water just drink water and on the or the completely completely cut carbon hydrate or or oils or yeah something like that or sugars like like that but yeah ingredients are very useful very useful and very important for my for our body and for our for our works our for our movement or for our works. of my brain and body and the muscles and on our other or other yeah long lungs or bones or yeah something or and the skins or eyes and so so yeah I can't I can't I can say everything everything in my body but I also but but the point I want to say is that is the. is the. is the very strict diet 10. to to cut or reduce or cut the. the ingredients and the ingredients from the food and which is. which is very neat to produce produce new muscles or to produce new bones or or some or or somehow maintaining maintaining our skin or maintaining some kind of function of my body so strict strict diet. would strict diet I think strict diet will. hurt your body yourself. So yes. strict diet is a kind of is a kind of long run long run self killing or I don't know how to say self killing kill myself or yeah kill myself so so you know if you if you try to if you try to if you try strict diet you will be you will be you will you will be just trying to kill yourself so don't so don't take. don't take too strong too strict diet just. for your body just for just for yourself.
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Okay, let's begin discussing the topic. Today's focus is on whether you adhere to a strict diet regimen. It seems like many people aim to either shed weight or limit their calorie intake by cutting down on foods like rice, bread, or fatty items. Some may even opt for extreme measures such as fasting or eliminating entire food groups like carbohydrates or oils. However, it's essential to recognize the importance of nutrients for our body functions, including muscle growth, bone health, and overall vitality. Overly restrictive diets can be harmful in the long run, as they deprive the body of essential ingredients necessary for various bodily processes. In essence, embarking on an excessively strict diet can be self-destructive. It's crucial to prioritize your well-being and avoid extreme dietary measures that could potentially harm your health.
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Rewrite following sentences. These are written by voice record. Yeah, so yeah, everybody, I have 7 things to think about. So my solution have not founded my solution, not found. So my solution have not. been have never been explored, have not been never been have not been never been found. So I'm I'm very striving to I'm very struggling in the same hell in the these days so so I need to I need to try to try to try to go outside of my comfort zone and and some kind of exploring some solution exploring some new world for me for me so. to to to see my future and the two to make my make to make my way to the future. So yeah so. the thing I want to say is is is completely same same before Sam on Sam of the yesterday or Sam of day before yesterday so yeah I've never been I've never found some. some answers for my for this for this problems so yeah but. yeah so. in in so when we when when I behind this struggle. I'm I tend I tend. to lose. or tend to be very anxiety and anxious for apprehensive about about it. But yeah this kind of this kind of emotion this kind of feeling is is is my. be useful in some in some point but but but but but almost but most of the moment the kind of. the kind of the kind of feelings the kind of feelings makes me very, very depressed depressed depressed and. and not to not and not be able to do anything. anything to so anything. so anything to anything to making making the situation better better and better. So yeah so so I need to so I don't I so I not I must I must not see see away and see away or ignore of this this my own feeling there is very precious is very important is very um. is very right to to feel in. this situation in my struggle in my struggle but but but when you feel when you feel when you feel it and you can you you are not able to do anything to make make the situation better. this time only only only only that time only when you are only when you when. you when you can't anything in the in in the moment in that moment you don't feel you don't have to feel like that and just just stay strong. Your heart is very strong and you and keep your heart. very strong and stay strong and that's and that's the that's the key to that's the key to explore your future explore your ability explore your relationships. Yeah. so yeah. I think the yeah I know I know and II have been and I have listen II have heard of of about the the most the most problems of the of the most problems in the in in this in this human society is is is from human relationship and relationship relationship to each other and so and so yeah. the relationship in the workplace or relationship in in school. in schools or relationship relationship to friends or lovers or or some kind of or some or to family Yeah it might be it can be very tough challenge or very complicated. complicated problems but if you if you can if you so bad if you could if you can if you if you if you are. but when you are when you are able to when you are when you when you are able to keep your heart very strong or heavy stay very strong you can be I think you can be II think you will you you are able to I think you are able to get through of it get through of it you can you can II think II assume or I presume you can you can overtake you can overcome that situation and. get and get get that opportunity so listen to me listen to my song lose yourself in the music the moment you want you better never let it go you wanna get one shot but not miss a chance to blow this opportunity counts once a lifetime yo.
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Yeah, so everyone, I have seven things to consider. My solution has not been found yet. I've been struggling with this dilemma, feeling trapped in the same cycle. Therefore, I must push beyond my comfort zone to explore new avenues and visualize my future path. This sentiment remains unchanged from yesterday or the day before. I've yet to discover any answers to my current predicament. Amidst this struggle, anxiety tends to overwhelm me. Although such emotions can sometimes serve a purpose, they mostly lead to profound feelings of depression, rendering me powerless to improve the situation. Nonetheless, it's crucial not to dismiss these feelings entirely; they're significant and valid amidst the struggle. However, during moments of helplessness, it's essential to remain resilient and keep faith in one's inner strength. Strengthening your resolve is key to navigating through challenges and fostering relationships. Human relationships, whether in the workplace, school, or personal life, often pose intricate challenges. Yet, with unwavering strength, one can overcome these obstacles and seize opportunities for growth. Remember, tough times don't last forever; staying resilient is the key to triumph.
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