[英語日記]英検準1級1次合格しました。先生ありがとう！

[添削後]
I passed the pre-first grade.
In the end, the writing section helped me.
I got 14 points out of 16. The average score of the successful applicant is also quite high, though. It's 13.
The grading scale seems to be very lenient.

I couldn't guess how much of a score I would get in the writing test from just practicing writing. Therefore, my biggest concern was the writing section.
So I planned to get a high score in the listening section to cover for mistakes in the writing.
I used 12 minutes out of the 90 minutes given for the writing test, to read the text of the listening test.

Unfortunately, the sound quality was terrible in the listening test. The sound was echoing, and I couldn't hear the questions very well.
I was really shocked about it and was feeling down due to it.

So, now I'm so happy to tell you the good result :)

[添削前] 
I passed the pre first grade.
At the end, writing section helped me.
I got 14 points out of 16. The average score of the successful applicant was also quite high, though. It's 13.
The grading scale seems to be very lenient.

I couldn't know about how much score I can get when practicing writing. Therefore, my most concern was the writing section.
So I planned to get high score in the listening section to cover mistakes in the writing.
I read the texts of the listening test using 12 minutes out of 90 minutes of the writing test time.

Unfortunately, the sound quality was terrible in the listening test. The sound was echoing, and I couldn't hear the questions very well.
I was really shocked about it and I really felt down.

So, now I'm so happy to tell you the good result :)