英語日記　#2　Proposing a new idea

Proposing a new idea for managing an EC (e-commerce) site

If I were the CEO of an e-commerce site, at first developing a user-friendly site for my company since our product could reach a wide audience.
For the next step, Using incentive analystic dashboards, AI powered recommendation system, it help consumers buy products and our team come up with a fresh strategy.
By the way, when I see something like 'X% off,' I tend to buy it.

Corrections by ChatGPT-sensei

If I were the CEO of an e-commerce site, I would first focus on developing a user-friendly site to ensure our products can reach a wide audience. For the next step, we could use incentive analytics dashboards and an AI-powered recommendation system. These tools would help consumers make purchases and assist our team in devising fresh strategies.
By the way, when I see something like 'X% off,' I tend to buy it.