英語検定ライティング準１級（第78回）

タイトル「思わせぶりは悪なのか？」

No, this suggestion isn’t supportable.
One reason makes the opinion unacceptable.

１年位前の話だが、東京のある歓楽街で１人の女の子が殺された。性的サービスをする店の中で人気のある女の子だったとのこと。店のコンセプトは「仲良く」だった。
About a year has passed since a shocking online article hit on me, which said that a female employee working at a certain facility in Tokyo where she provides male customers with a sexual services, which requires him to pay an expensive admission fees.
She was the most popular cast there, and the shop’s concept was that every cast treats him with an extremely friendly attitude, in other words, “icha and icha” in Japanese language.

そういう店の収益は、仲良くできる素敵な女の子で成り立っている。ルックスを含む見た目こそがその業界の強みだとは思う。それに加えていい接客があれば最強だ。
These shops’ profits are composed with the girls who have talents and efforts to make good friends with a customer who seeks for a satisfactory sexual services.
And what matters the most in this business is their appearances and styles with slender physicals, which is the ultimately best with politeness and consideration.

そこでは現れるのは「勘違い客」だ。女の子の優しさに勘違いしてしまう。女の子は客がお金を払うから店の方針に従っているだけなのに、それは分かりづらいのだろう。
But there appears a male guest without knowledge about a cast’s feeling and emotion, to our regret, so that he tend to think that she might be personally affectionate toward himself by mistake.
She treats him because he pays a large amount of admission fees for her sexual but mechanical behaviors without any romantic feelings with a male customer, which is an order or indication from a shop, even with reluctance.
A customer incapable of figuring out her duty fails to understand the real truth, her reluctance.

彼はストーカー化して、女の子のクレームにより出入り禁止となってしまった。しかし彼は携帯番号を変えて、登録している名前も変えて、ナイフを持ってやって来た。
The criminal became an extreme stalker, and the female cast naturally rejected his appointment, in other words, “no entry allowed.”
But he changed his mobile phone’s number, at the same time, he changed his handle name and entered her room with a dagger knife.

再会して彼はナイフで彼女を何度も刺した。彼女は亡き人となった。その店にとって女の子が殺される事件は初めてではなかった。だがコンセプトが原因とは思いたくない。
He met her again and pierced her with too a dangerous and critical tool over and over again, so that she was dead only to go to the heaven.
Actually, such a murder case wasn’t the first time for the same shop, but its concept wasn’t the decisive reason that he killed her, we assume.

確かにこの世の中は孤独な男性が多い。性的な行為をサービスに求めたくもなる。だがそこにあるのは普通の恋愛ではない。区別するのはそんなにも難しいことなのだろう。
It is true that the number of males who feel loneliness  and solitude in his daily life becomes larger and larger, who seek for the sexual services once in a while.
But they cannot find a true romance there, but it might be so difficult for them to distinguish a sexual service and a true romantic relationship with a girl around him.

This reason makes the question titled above unfavorable.