【英作文練習④】モーニング

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最近の朝活について！

①目指せ4時半
＜訂正前＞
I like waking up early.
Because when I have some morning activities, I can feel fulfill all day.
At first I drink hot water with lemon, then I go running or I study English.
I wake up 5:00, and my coworker picks me up at 7:00.
So I can study more one hour if I can wake up on schedule.
＜訂正後＞
I like waking up early because I need to do a lot of morning activities, when I'm done with those morning activities I felt productive all day.
At first I drink hot water with lemon,  and then I go running or I study English.
I woke up at 5 am and my co-worker picked me up at 7 am.
*I can study more for one hour if I can woke up early/ on time.
*?(I can study more than one hour if I can woke up early/ on time.)

②50:50から勝ち越し気味
<訂正前>
Sometimes I can wake up early, sometimes I wake up a little late.
I think it's related to motivation and target.
When I don't have motivation, I have a idea which can improve my motivation.
<訂正後>
Sometimes I can woke up early, Sometimes I woke up a little late so I think its related with motivation.
When I'm not motivated so its difficult for me to do things/finish things easily but if I'm motivated so I can do things on time without feeling tired/exhausted.
When I'm not motivated I knew how to make myself be motivated.

③勝手に勉強仲間
<訂正前>
Recently many people upload videos which is hardly studying hisself, I watch that and I can get stimlated.
<訂正後>
Recently many people upload videos which they are having a hard time studying by themselves, I watched that videos and I get inspired to do the same thing.

海外にすんでよかったことは、自分の言葉を無理やり伝えるのではなくて、相手の様子を見て「あ、この国の人はこの感覚／考え方ないんだ」と話の内容を切り替えられるようになった事。