English diary 【10th time】

●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Thursday. Yesterday, I went to the office.
Recently, I started swearing more easily because I often mainly eating white rice. So I feel like that I lost a little weight and my skin became beautiful.
Thanks to them, I was able to regain my motivation for working out.
In terms of learning, I continue to mainly studying  PHP in programming languages. Now I developing to web applications, but I can't resolve errors which comments displaying per thread when I tried to register new comment and at initial display. I think that I want to try to resolve that.
Thank you for reading my memorable 10th English diary.  

After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Thursday. Yesterday, I went to the office. Recently, I started swearing more easily because I've been mainly eating white rice. So I feel that I've lost a little weight and my skin has become beautiful. Thanks to these changes, I was able to regain my motivation for working out. In terms of learning, I continue to mainly study PHP in programming languages. Now I'm developing web applications, but I can't resolve errors where comments display per thread when I try to register a new comment and at the initial display. I think that I want to try to resolve that. Thank you for reading my memorable 10th English diary.

Summary of corrections

  1. Changed "feel like that I lost" to "feel that I've lost" for better clarity and grammar.

  2. Changed "studying PHP" to "study PHP" for correct verb form.

  3. Added "I'm" before "developing" to form a complete sentence.

  4. Added "where" before "comments" to clarify the context.

  5. Added "try to" before "register a new comment" for completeness.

  6. Added "the" before "initial display" for specificity.

  7. Removed extra space before "Thank you" for consistency.


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