English diary 【9th time】

●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Tuesday. Yesterday, I remote worked at home.
I have thought that I want to join another project , but I received consultation which want to stay now project  from my boss because I listen thing that customer want to me until within the fiscal year.
Honesty I'm a little confused because I want to experience developing web application using another programming language etc Java.
But I'm more confused because I think that I should experience to design, requirements definition  and team management such as upstream process.
I think that I decide to consulting my boss again.  
Thank you for reading.  

After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Tuesday. Yesterday, I worked remotely from home. I've been considering joining another project, I heard from my boss that the client expressed a desire for me to stay on this project until the end of the fiscal year. Honestly, I'm a little confused because I want to gain experience in developing web applications using a different programming language like Java. However, I'm even more confused because I feel I should also gain experience in areas like design, requirements definition, and team management, which are part of the upstream process. I think I'll talk to my boss again to discuss my options. Thank you for reading.

Summary of corrections

  1. "remote worked" -> "worked remotely": "Remote worked" is not the correct grammatical form. "Worked remotely" is the correct phrase, where "remotely" describes the manner in which the work was done.

  2. "want to join another project" -> "considering joining another project": Using "considering" instead of "want to" conveys that you are contemplating the idea of joining another project rather than expressing a firm decision.

  3. "consultation which want to stay now project" -> "advice to stay on the current project": "Consultation" refers to the act of seeking advice or information, but "advice" is the appropriate term here. "Which want to stay now project" is unclear; "to stay on the current project" clearly communicates the boss's advice to remain where you are.

  4. "because I listen thing that customer want to me" -> "because I need to address the customer's needs": "Listen thing" is grammatically incorrect; "address the customer's needs" accurately conveys the task at hand.

  5. "Honesty I'm a little confused" -> "Honestly, I'm a little confused": Added the adverb "Honestly" to the beginning of the sentence for clarity and proper punctuation.

  6. "I think that I should experience to design" -> "I feel I should also gain experience in areas like design": "Experience to design" is unclear; "gain experience in areas like design" specifies the desired experience.

  7. "requirements definition and team management such as upstream process" -> "requirements definition, and team management, which are part of the upstream process": Added commas for clarity and restructuring to specify that these are elements of the upstream process.

  8. "I think that I decide to consulting my boss again" -> "I think I'll talk to my boss again to discuss my options": Corrected the verb form from "decide" to "deciding" and changed "consulting" to "talk to" for clarity. Also, added "my options" for specificity.


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