English diary 【9th time】
●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Tuesday. Yesterday, I remote worked at home.
I have thought that I want to join another project , but I received consultation which want to stay now project from my boss because I listen thing that customer want to me until within the fiscal year.
Honesty I'm a little confused because I want to experience developing web application using another programming language etc Java.
But I'm more confused because I think that I should experience to design, requirements definition and team management such as upstream process.
I think that I decide to consulting my boss again.
Thank you for reading.
●After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Tuesday. Yesterday, I worked remotely from home. I've been considering joining another project, I heard from my boss that the client expressed a desire for me to stay on this project until the end of the fiscal year. Honestly, I'm a little confused because I want to gain experience in developing web applications using a different programming language like Java. However, I'm even more confused because I feel I should also gain experience in areas like design, requirements definition, and team management, which are part of the upstream process. I think I'll talk to my boss again to discuss my options. Thank you for reading.
●Summary of corrections
"remote worked" -> "worked remotely": "Remote worked" is not the correct grammatical form. "Worked remotely" is the correct phrase, where "remotely" describes the manner in which the work was done.
"want to join another project" -> "considering joining another project": Using "considering" instead of "want to" conveys that you are contemplating the idea of joining another project rather than expressing a firm decision.
"consultation which want to stay now project" -> "advice to stay on the current project": "Consultation" refers to the act of seeking advice or information, but "advice" is the appropriate term here. "Which want to stay now project" is unclear; "to stay on the current project" clearly communicates the boss's advice to remain where you are.
"because I listen thing that customer want to me" -> "because I need to address the customer's needs": "Listen thing" is grammatically incorrect; "address the customer's needs" accurately conveys the task at hand.
"Honesty I'm a little confused" -> "Honestly, I'm a little confused": Added the adverb "Honestly" to the beginning of the sentence for clarity and proper punctuation.
"I think that I should experience to design" -> "I feel I should also gain experience in areas like design": "Experience to design" is unclear; "gain experience in areas like design" specifies the desired experience.
"requirements definition and team management such as upstream process" -> "requirements definition, and team management, which are part of the upstream process": Added commas for clarity and restructuring to specify that these are elements of the upstream process.
"I think that I decide to consulting my boss again" -> "I think I'll talk to my boss again to discuss my options": Corrected the verb form from "decide" to "deciding" and changed "consulting" to "talk to" for clarity. Also, added "my options" for specificity.
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