English diary 【18th time】
●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Thursday. Yesterday, I went to office and work out in the gym after finished a job. Lately, I have continued to keeping high motivation to working out. On the other hand, motivation towards work is low. I think that I want to study web application and programming language, and I want to earn myself.
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●After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Thursday. Yesterday, I went to the office and worked out in the gym after finishing a job. Lately, I have been maintaining high motivation for working out. On the other hand, my motivation towards work is low. I think I want to study web applications and programming languages, and I want to earn for myself.
Thank you for reading the 18th English diary.
●Summary of corrections
Original: "Today is Thursday. Yesterday, I went to office and work out in the gym after finished a job." Correction: "Today is Thursday. Yesterday, I went to the office and worked out in the gym after finishing a job."
Original: "Lately, I have continued to keeping high motivation to working out." Correction: "Lately, I have been maintaining high motivation for working out."
Original: "On the other hand, motivation towards work is low." Correction: "On the other hand, my motivation towards work is low."
Original: "I think that I want to study web application and programming language, and I want to earn myself." Correction: "I think I want to study web applications and programming languages, and I want to earn for myself."
Overall, your diary entry is clear and communicates your thoughts effectively. Keep up the good work!
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