English diary 【15th time】

●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Friday. Yesterday, I went to office and finished a job of this week.
2nd Golden Week from today, but I made my wife angry because even though I'm her doing to housework, I asked, "Did you clean ?".
She hasn't talked since last night when I made her angry. 
I'm really regretting my actions. But I can't solve the problem by apologizing any more, I think I'll focus on studying today.
Anyway,  I'm going to go to the gym now and go to the beauty salon. 
Thank you for reading 16th English diary.  

●After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Friday. Yesterday, I went to the office and finished this week's job. The 2nd Golden Week begins today, but I made my wife angry because, even though she was doing housework, I asked, "Did you clean?" She hasn't spoken to me since last night when I upset her. I really regret my actions. However, I don't think I can solve the problem just by apologizing anymore. I'm going to focus on studying today. For now, I'm going to go to the gym for some muscle training, and then I'm going to go to the beauty salon. Thank you for reading my 16th English diary entry.

●Summary of corrections

1. "Yesterday, I went to the office and finished this week's job."

   • Changed "a job of this week" to "this week's job" for clarity and correctness. "This week's job" indicates the task you completed during the week.

2. "The 2nd Golden Week begins today,"

   • Changed "2nd Golden Week from today" to "The 2nd Golden Week begins today" for clarity. It's clearer to specify that the 2nd Golden Week is starting today.

3. "because even though she was doing housework, I asked, 'Did you clean?'"

   • Adjusted the phrasing for clarity and correctness. Instead of "her doing to housework," it's clearer to say "she was doing housework."

4. "She hasn't spoken to me since last night when I upset her."

   • Changed "when I made her angry" to "when I upset her" for smoother flow. Both convey the same idea, but "upset her" fits better in this context.

5. "I don't think I can solve the problem just by apologizing anymore."

   • Clarified the sentence structure for smoother flow and clearer meaning.

6. "I'm going to focus on studying today."

   • Added "today" for clarity. It specifies that your focus on studying is for the current day.

7. "Anyway, I'm off to the gym now and then to the beauty salon."

   • Reworded slightly for clarity and flow. "Anyway" is a transition word to move on from the previous thought. Changed "going to go" to "I'm off to" for smoother flow.

8. "Thank you for reading my 16th English diary entry."

   • Added "my" for clarity. It specifies that it's your diary entry being read.