English diary 【12th time】

Ko

●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Saturday. Yesterday, I went to the office and I finished working last day a job of this week. Yesterday’s dinner was a gorgeous with horse mackerel and pork fins. I am grateful to my wife who always cooks delicious and healthy meals. Thank you so much for everything.
Today, we're going to working out at the gym in the morning and going to H&M in the Lalaport in the afternoon. Since Golden Week start, I want to be a meaningful holiday that climbing mountain and going to sauna etc. 
Thank you for reading 12th English diary.  

●After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Saturday. Yesterday, I went to the office and finished my last day of work for the week. Yesterday's dinner was gorgeous, with horse mackerel and pork fins. I am grateful to my wife, who always cooks delicious and healthy meals. Thank you so much for everything. Today, we're going to work out at the gym in the morning and go to H&M in Lalaport in the afternoon. Since Golden Week has started, I want to make it a meaningful holiday by climbing mountains and going to the sauna, etc. Thank you for reading my 12th English diary.

●Summary of corrections

  1. "I finished working last day a job of this week" -> "I finished my last day of work for the week."

  2. "Yesterday’s dinner was a gorgeous with horse mackerel and pork fins" -> "Yesterday's dinner was gorgeous, with horse mackerel and pork fins."

  3. "I am grateful to my wife who always cooks delicious and healthy meals" -> "I am grateful to my wife, who always cooks delicious and healthy meals."

  4. "Today, we're going to working out at the gym in the morning" -> "Today, we're going to work out at the gym in the morning."

  5. "Since Golden Week start" -> "Since Golden Week has started."

  6. "I want to be a meaningful holiday that climbing mountain and going to sauna etc." -> "I want to make it a meaningful holiday by climbing mountains and going to the sauna, etc."

  7. "Thank you for reading 12th English diary" -> "Thank you for reading my 12th English diary."


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