English diary 【14th time】

●Before correction by Chat GBT
Today is Wednesday. Yesterday, I went to office, but It was hard to work. The reason is that I went to Nanba in Osaka with my friend Kota the day before yesterday and we drank a lot of alcohol in the park. So I was so hugover that I threw up yesterday morning. I got scared drinking alcohol.
I eat fermented red bean paste in breakfast. I was very sweet and felt good.  
I restart healthy life from today. Thank you for reading 13th English diary.  

After correction by Chat GBT
Today is Wednesday. Yesterday, I went to the office, but it was hard to work. The reason is that the day before yesterday, I went to Nanba in Osaka with my friend Kota, and we drank a lot of alcohol in the park. So, I was so hungover that I threw up yesterday morning. I got scared of drinking alcohol. For breakfast, I ate fermented red bean paste. It was very sweet and made me feel good. I am restarting a healthy lifestyle from today. Thank you for reading my 13th English diary.

Summary of corrections

  1. "It was hard to work" - This is correct, but it could be improved by adding "the" before "office" to specify which office you are referring to.

  2. "The reason is that the day before yesterday" - This phrase is a bit awkward. It can be improved by adding a comma after "that" to create a smoother transition between the clauses.

  3. "I got scared drinking alcohol." - This sentence is grammatically correct, but it might sound clearer if you add "of" after "scared" to indicate what you are scared of.

  4. "I eat fermented red bean paste in breakfast." - "Eat" should be changed to "ate" to match the past tense of the rest of the diary entry, and "in" should be changed to "for" to indicate that fermented red bean paste was the breakfast meal.

  5. "I was very sweet and felt good." - This sentence could be clearer. It seems like you're describing the fermented red bean paste, so it would be better to specify that. Also, "sweet" may be a typo for "swell" or "well." Assuming "sweet" is correct, it still needs to be changed to "It was very sweet, and I felt good."

  6. "Thank you for reading 13th English diary." - This sentence is almost correct, but it needs an article before "13th." You can say "my 13th English diary" to make it clear whose diary it is.

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