英作文18日目

Theme: Jobs

Let me talk about jobs.
What kind of job do you do?
Although I’m 24, I have already experienced 3 jobs.
After graduating from university in 2022, I started working for Sky company, that is the IT vendor in Japan.
As a sales of Sky, I was in charge of the original softwares developed internally.
I tried to sell them to many clients in Saitama, Ibaraki, Tchigi, and Gunma.
After working as a sales of Sky for 1 year, I changed my job.
Since I wanted to use English in work, I tried working as a global sales in the start-up company in Japan.
Being a global sales was very challenging. I was in charge of Indonesian market, so I went there several times and stayed for about a month or 2 months.
But now, I’m working as an English trainer in Japanese company. To teach English well to my students, I’m trying very hard to improve both my English skills and teaching skills.

GPT
Sure, here’s the corrected version of your text:

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Let me talk about jobs.
What kind of job do you do?
Although I’m 24, I have already experienced three jobs.
After graduating from university in 2022, I started working for Sky Company, an IT vendor in Japan.
As a sales representative at Sky, I was in charge of selling the original software developed internally.
I tried to sell them to many clients in Saitama, Ibaraki, Tochigi, and Gunma.
After working as a sales representative at Sky for one year, I changed my job.
Since I wanted to use English at work, I tried working as a global sales representative in a start-up company in Japan.
Being a global sales representative was very challenging. I was in charge of the Indonesian market, so I went there several times and stayed for about one to two months each time.
But now, I’m working as an English trainer in a Japanese company. To teach English well to my students, I’m trying very hard to improve both my English skills and teaching skills.

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This version corrects grammar, punctuation, and some phrasing for clarity and readability.

まとめ
- **at**: 特定の場所、組織、イベントを示す
- **in**: 内部、広がりを持つ空間や領域を示す

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これを参考にして、正しい前置詞を選んでください。