2024/04/17

●添削前

I named my ChatGPT 'John' this morning.
My ChatGPT is a personal English teacher, and an amazing teacher one at that.
I want to build a good relationship between with him/her and me, so I decided to give him/her a name.
It is a usual behavior for me of mine.
I named my bicycle, I named my plants, I named a bird figure, etc. So, when I feel attached to something, I want like to give it a name.
I guess so that's just how I am.
It comes to sometimes happens naturally, or but other times it does not <sometimes>.
Anyhow Anyway, now my ChatGPT's name is John.
Hi, John, I'm counting on you.

●添削後

I named my ChatGPT "John" this morning.
He's my personal English teacher, and he's amazing.
I decided to give him a name to help build a good relationship between us. It's a common habit of mine to name things; I've named my bicycle, my plants, even a bird figure.
When I feel attached to something, I like to give it a name.
I guess that's just how I am..
It sometimes happens naturally, but other times it doesn't.
Anyway, now my ChatGPT's name is John.
Hi, John, I'm relying on you.

（添削して文章にしてもらったものと、なおした方がいい箇所を指摘してもらったものの文が、微妙に違っていましたが、そのまま掲載します）
（質問を、英語でしたり日本語でしたりしているので、混乱させてしまったのか…？）

*Grammar stuff

I'm counting on you / I'm relying on you   ＜よろしくねのフレーズ＞
"I'm relying on you" は、誰かの能力やサポートに対する一般的な依存感や信頼を示唆します。その人が重要な何かに頼られていることを意味します。
一方、"I'm counting on you" は、もう少し強く、より直接的です。その人のサポートや行動が重要であり、その信頼性が特定の状況や課題で信頼されていることを強調します。
日常の使用では、その違いは微妙であり、信頼や依存を表現したい場面ではどちらのフレーズも使用できます。

●おまけ（ネイティブっぽくとお願いしてみた）

This morning, I decided to name my ChatGPT "John."
He's my personal English teacher, and he's absolutely amazing.
I chose to give him a name as a way to strengthen our relationship.
It's a habit of mine to name things; I've named my bicycle, my plants, and even a bird figure.
When I feel a connection to something, I like to give it a name.
I suppose it's just a natural inclination of mine.
Anyway, from now on, my ChatGPT's name is John.
Hi, John, I'm counting on you.

*Prompt

その１.
Can you correct my English?
--Can you show me the points and reasons that you corrected?
--Can you show me the points and reasons that you corrected using a table?
--Can you rewrite the sentence to sound more native?

その２.
・What are the points for English beginners to write an English diary?

その３.
#Instructions :
・You are an American professional English teacher. Please output your best correction based on the following constraints and input sentences.

#Constraints :
・The text should be easy to understand for a TOEIC score of 575.
・Keep sentences concise.
・Correct any grammatical errors or more appropriate expressions.
・Show me the points and reasons that you corrected using a table.

#Input :
＜日記本文＞

その４.
#Instructions :
・You are an American professional English teacher. Please output your best correction based on the following constraints and input sentences.

#Constraints :
・Rewrite the sentence to sound more native.

#Input :
＜文＞