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TASK1

お題：大きいお店で購入するのと小さいお店で購入するのどちらがいい？？

自分的には止まらずにスムーズに話せたのですが、結果は4点中2点でした。
録音を聞いてみると、言い直してしまっている箇所が5箇所くらいありました。言い直さずに先に進んだ方が高得点が取れるのかもしれません。

自分の回答（公式サイトの自動文字起こし）

I agree with the idea that buying small shops, because of some reasons. The first reason is that in small shops there friendly shoppers in my case in small shops I talked with friendly shoppers and I had a great a special by by special experience as a customers. Second example, second reaso- one is that we can buy specific but good in the small store, for example that minor books are in the small bookstores.

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Sample Answer

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In my opinion, shopping in small specialty stores is preferable to visiting large grocery and department stores. Firstly, small specialty stores offer a personalized and efficient shopping experience. For example, the staff are knowledgeable about their products, allowing them to quickly locate and recommend items that suit my needs, saving me time and effort compared to navigating large stores. Secondly, these stores often provide higher quality products and unique selections. For instance, when buying artisanal cheeses or handcrafted goods, small shops offer diverse options that cater to my specific tastes. In conclusion, I prefer shopping in small specialty stores due to their personalized service, efficiency, and distinctive product offerings.