Diary 2023/04/24

I've been writing my diary in English to improve my skill.
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My husband and I tried to reserve seats for a famous horse race called the Tenno Sho. However, as soon as the system opened, it went down right away. Because of this, we couldn't access the reservation page for a long time and we became very frustrated. I really hope that their system will be stronger.

Correction by ChatGPT

I asked, "Can you rewrite the sentence to sound more native and show me the points and reasons that you corrected?"

Wonderful!!

Thank you for reading!