ground shook, yesterday evening, in a coastal area, occasional tremors, that woke me up.

The ground was shaking very hard yesterday's evening because I've been at Hokuriku area from yesterday. I'm safe now as I was not at coastal area. While sleeping last night, it was shaking sometimes, which made me awake.

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The ground shook very hard yesterday evening because I was in the Hokuriku area. I'm safe now as I was not in a coastal area. While sleeping last night, there were occasional tremors that woke me up.

Notes:

1. Changed "was shaking" to "shook" for better fluency.

2. Removed "yesterday's" before "evening" to make the sentence more concise and natural.

3. Clarified the time reference by specifying "yesterday evening."

4. Simplified "I've been at Hokuriku area from yesterday" to "I was in the Hokuriku area," which is more direct.

5. Replaced "it was shaking sometimes" with "there were occasional tremors" for a clearer and more descriptive expression.