undergo significant change, Particularly, with the widespread use of the Internet, have a broad impact on, society as a whole, leading to major revolution, in the fields of business, as well

日本語: "新しいテクノロジーの進化により、私たちの生活は大きく変化しています。特に、インターネットの普及により、情報の入手が容易になり、世界中の人々と簡単につながることができるようになりました。この変化は社会全体に影響を与え、ビジネスや教育の分野でも大きな変革が生じています。"

Due to development of new technology, our lives has largely changed. Particulary, by spread of the Internet, it has become easier to obtain information and to connect with people all over the world. This change influenced on the whole society, big revolution has occured in the area of business and education too.

ChatGPT

素晴らしい努力ですね。一部微調整ができそうです。以下が微調整を加えた翻訳です。

"Due to the development of new technology, our lives have undergone significant changes. Particularly, with the widespread use of the Internet, it has become easier to obtain information and connect with people all over the world. This change has had a broad impact on society as a whole, leading to a major revolution in the fields of business and education as well."