Diary 2024/05/05

I am just  starting to write a diary in English to improve my English skills.
Specifically, I want to improve my vocabulary.
I intend to revise this diary with ChatGPT4 once I am done writing.
Revised version is naturally attached below original version.
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I went to VIVALA LOCK yesterday. The purpose artist is only Gen Hoshino, who is one of the my favorite artists.
In conclusion, his live performance is excellent.
At last song, "Jigokude naze warui", I cannot help crying. It is surprised by myself.
When I went to home with train, I ride too far past my destination two times in a row.
As a results, I cannot reach my house. I reluctantly stayed Moriya station from 1:30 am to 5:20 am.
It was a blessing in disguise that I had a book I intend to read.

Revised version
I went to VIVA LA ROCK yesterday. The main reason was to see Gen Hoshino, who is one of my favorite artists. His live performance was excellent. During the last song, 'Jigoku de Naze Warui,' I couldn't help crying. It surprised me. On the way home by train, I accidentally rode past my stop twice in a row. As a result, I couldn't reach my house. Reluctantly, I stayed at Moriya station from 1:30 am until 5:20 am. It was a blessing in disguise, as I had a book with me that I intended to read.

• purpose artistというフレーズは誤り

• one of the my favorite artistsではtheとmyが重複

• his live performance is excellentでは時制が誤り

• At last songは文法的に誤り

• I cannot help cryingでは時制が誤り

• It is surprised by myselfでは文法的に誤り：高校の先生曰く感情を表す単語は「加害者側」と覚える

• went to home with trainは不自然

• I ride too far past my destinationでは時制が誤り

• I cannot reach my houseでは時制が誤り

• stayed Moriya stationはstayの後にatが必要

• a book I intend toでは時制が誤り

ほぼ時制の誤りと基本的なミスだった．基本が何もできていないやんけ，，，