Diary 2024/05/06-07

2024/05/06
It was not my day. Well, those who have psychiatric disorder or (and) developmental disorder is always not those days.
I do have four above disorder, bipolar disorder, panic disorder, ADHD, and ASD. I feel I have handicap in contrast to healthy subject from day to day.

I had thought I wrote how unlucky day, but I forget almost of all. I think my character is useful to myself.

When it comes to writing about "always", I sometimes associate a dialogue. 
It appear in Harry Potter, which is my favorite novel/movie and specifically Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows. I avoid writing about details to not read/watch this.

2024/05/07
Today, I scheduled going to hospital. But I perceived I forgot my wallet.
I gave up going to hospital because I did not have any cash and insurance certificate. It is bad days two days in a row!

revised
2024/05/06
I do have four above disorder, bipolar disorder, panic disorder, ADHD, and ASD.を「I have four disorders: bipolar disorder, panic disorder, ADHD, and ASD.とコロンを使って羅列
・I feel I have handicap in contrast to healthy subject from day to day.で,handicapをat a disadvantageに,healthy subjectをhealthy individualsに変更
・I had thought I wrote how unlucky day, but I forget almost of all.を
I thought I wrote about how unlucky my day was, but I've forgotten almost all of it.に.現在完了形.

2024/05/07
scheduled going to hospitalをscheduled to goに
・perceived I forgot my walletで,「perceived」は通常、感覚や直感に関連する文脈で使われるため,realizedが適切
・I did not have any cash and my insurance certificateで,andをorに
・It is bad days two days in a row!をIt's been bad days two days in a row!に.現在完了形.

perceiveとrealizeの違いなどに言及してくれるのはありがたい...!!!

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