【英作文練習①】コロ中

DMM英会話レッスン前に事前に作文をして、レッスンしながら先生に文章を直してもらっています。
今回は質問形式に挑戦です！

コロナ禍の中国の暮らし。

I wrote something about myself. Please correct my mistakes and please give me advice if you have better expressions.

①コロナについて会話形式の作文練習します
＜訂正前＞
Today I make conversation about covid-19 in China.
I can spend almost normal life in China, there are not many effect with covid-19.
＜訂正後＞
Today I made a conversation about covid-19 in China.
In China, life seems to be almost normal, there are not so many COVID-19 infections. 

②封鎖！
<訂正前>
“How did China control covid-19?”
 -There are very strict lock down if covid was found out.
<訂正後>
How did China control covid-19?”
 -If there are new cases found, strict restrictions/lockdowns are placed (put into place).

③スピーディワクチン！
<訂正前>
“Did people vaccinate?”
 -Almost people have already vaccinated. Maybe Chinese vaccine efficacy is low with few side effect.
But, so speedy and there are enough quantity.
<訂正後>
 “Did all people get vaccinated?” 
-Almost all people have already been vaccinated. Maybe Chinese vaccine efficacy is low with few side effects. But, the vaccination is speedy and there is enough quantity. 

④日本への一時帰国！
<訂正前>
“Do you come and go to Japan?”
 -I can go to Japan now, But I have stay in home after I arrive Japan.
 Then I also have to quarantine three weeks when I back to China.
<訂正後>
“Can you go to Japan and return to China?”
-I can go to Japan now, But I have to stay at home after I arrive in Japan. Then I also have to be quarantined for three weeks when I come back to China. 

⑤いい経験です；）
<訂正前>
“Do you have any plans go back to Japan?”
 -I don’t have a chance go to Japan now. Some Japanese people who working China starts going to Japan.
 But I work in small company, just have one Japanese. So I have no choice.
<訂正後>
“Do you have any plans to go back to Japan?”
 -I don’t have a chance to go to Japan now. Some Japanese people who are working in China start going to Japan. But I work in a small company, and I'm the only Japanese, so I have no choice.