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Theme: Summar

Let me talk about summar. Do you like summar?
I love summer because of several reasons, and the best reason is that I like hot weather.
If it’s hot, you can enjoy many outside activities, for example hiking in the mountain, swimming in the sea, BBQ along the sea, and so on.
Also, you don’t need to wear a lot of clothes. Some people enjoy winter coodination with lots of clothes, but I like summar cordination with a few clothes, because it’s very confortable.
In addition, you can sweat a lot in hot weather. I will feel healthy after sweating a lot.
In terms of bad points of winter, I’m not good at cold weather. I’m sensitive to cold, so my hands and foot will become very cold in winter season.
In this summer, I will go to Okinawa. In Okinawa, I will enjoy the beatiful sea and delicious seafood.

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Sure, here is a revised version of your text:

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Let me talk about summer. Do you like summer?  
I love summer for several reasons, and the best reason is that I like hot weather. When it’s hot, you can enjoy many outdoor activities, such as hiking in the mountains, swimming in the sea, and having BBQs by the shore.

Also, you don’t need to wear a lot of clothes. Some people enjoy winter fashion with many layers, but I prefer summer fashion with fewer clothes because it’s very comfortable.

In addition, you can sweat a lot in hot weather, which makes me feel healthy.

As for the drawbacks of winter, I’m not good with cold weather. I’m sensitive to the cold, so my hands and feet become very cold during the winter season.

This summer, I will go to Okinawa. In Okinawa, I will enjoy the beautiful sea and delicious seafood.

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This version maintains your original points while improving the flow and correcting some minor errors.