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Let me explain about my hobbies.
There are mainly three things that I like to do.
First, I like watching baseball.
Since I am from Yokohama, I am a fan of Baystars.
But when I was a student, I didn’t like it, because it was a weak team.
Now, Baystars has become stronger, I became a fan of it.
Second, I like watching animation, especially based on sports.
Before becoming a business person, I wasn’t intersted in animations.
Now, I’m a fan of animations, especially based on sports.
I often watch animations to reduce my stress.
In addition, I like execirig, including runnning and working out.
Since I was a runner at junior high school, I like runnning very much.
It reduce my stress and I feel better after running.
For working out, I’m into it recently.
Working out will make me look masculine, so I usually go to a gym.

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Let me explain my hobbies.
There are mainly three things that I like to do.
First, I like watching baseball.
Since I am from Yokohama, I am a fan of the Baystars.
When I was a student, I didn’t like baseball because the team was weak.
Now that the Baystars have become stronger, I have become a fan.
Second, I like watching animation, especially sports-based anime.
Before becoming a business person, I wasn’t interested in anime.
Now, I’m a fan, particularly of sports-based anime.
I often watch anime to reduce my stress.
In addition, I like exercising, including running and working out.
Since I was a runner in junior high school, I have always liked running.
It reduces my stress, and I feel better after running.
As for working out, I’ve gotten into it recently.
Working out will make me look more muscular, so I usually go to the gym.