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Let me talk about pets.
Do you have a pet? Currently I don’t have.
When I was a child, I kept beetles and small fishes, but I think I can’t categorize them as my pets.
I guess most common pets are dogs and cats.
I have never kepet them before, but I want to live with them in the future.
As for dogs, they are very cute. Since they are very fimiliar with people, you can become very happy by liviing with them.
As for cats, they are also cute. And one of the good points of cats is the ease of taking care of. You don’t need to bring them for walking. In addition, since they don’t usually bark, it won’t be noisy to keep them.
I will make my like much happier with dogs or cats in the future.


Sure, here’s a revised version of your text:

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Let me talk about pets. Do you have a pet? Currently, I don’t have any. When I was a child, I kept beetles and small fish, but I don't think I can categorize them as pets.

I guess the most common pets are dogs and cats. I have never kept them before, but I want to live with them in the future.

As for dogs, they are very cute. Since they are very familiar with people, living with them can make you very happy.

As for cats, they are also cute. One of the good points of cats is the ease of taking care of them. You don’t need to take them for walks. In addition, since they don’t usually make loud noises, it won’t be noisy to keep them.

I believe having dogs or cats will make my life much happier in the future.

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I made some minor adjustments for clarity and grammar. Your thoughts and points are well-expressed!

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