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課題

I would better start diet, and lose weight.
I wouldn't go so far as to say that most weight, but I have kept my weight relativery high.
I want to chance of the starting diet. Recentry, I want to new a weight scale.

書きたい英語

ダイエットしないとそろそろまずいです。。
過去最高の体重ではないですが、比較的高い数字をキープしています。
ダイエットに関する画期的なきっかけがほしいです。具体的にはあたらしい体重計がほしい！

AI様のご指摘

1. 文法ミス:

   • I would better start diet, and lose weight. -> I should start a diet and lose weight. (文法)

   • I wouldn't go so far as to say that most weight, but I have kept my weight relativery high. -> I wouldn't say that I'm overweight, but I have kept my weight relatively high. (文法)

   • I want to chance of the starting diet. -> I want to start a diet. (文法)

   • Recentry, I want to new a weight scale. -> Recently, I bought a new weight scale. (文法)

2. 語彙:

• diet -> a diet (冠詞)

• lose weight -> lose weight (動詞)

• most weight -> overweight (形容詞)

• relativery -> relatively (副詞)

• chance -> start (動詞)

• Recentry -> Recently (スペルミス)

• new -> buy (動詞)

• weight scale -> weight scale (名詞)

3. 表現:

• I wouldn't go so far as to say that most weight -> I wouldn't say that I'm overweight (より自然な表現)

• I want to chance of the starting diet. -> I want to start a diet. (より自然な表現)

• Recentry, I want to new a weight scale. -> Recently, I bought a new weight scale. (より自然な表現)

1. 修正後
   I should start a diet and lose weight.

2. I wouldn't say that I'm overweight, but I have kept my weight relatively high.

3. I want to start a diet.

4. Recently, I bought a new weight scale.

修正稿

I should start a diet and lose weight.
I wouldn't say that I'm overweight, but I have kept my weight relativery high.
I want to an opportunity start diet. Specifically, I want to a new weight scale.

答え合わせ

ダイエットを始めて体重を落とさなければ。

太りすぎとは言わないけど、体重関係は高いままだ。

ダイエットを始めるきっかけが欲しい。具体的には、体重計を新調したい。

opportunity….機会、きっかけ
I should start … 〜か始めなければ