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課題

In March.
This season of graduation ceremony. I like it.
I can remember my old self of the most in year.
I can't got good grades in my school life, I was anxious about not being able to imagine what I would become in the future when I was students. 
March is a month of reflection and growth for me, as I recall the uncertanity I faced and the actions I took to overcome it.

書きたい英語

3月だ。
卒業式の季節だ。この時期が私は好きです。
一年の中で一番昔の自分を思い出せるからです。
私は学生生活の中でなにか素晴らしい成績を収めたわけではなく、学生時代は将来自分がどうなるか想像できないことに不安を感じてました。
あの頃の不安を今も思い出すことで、なにか行動を起こすきっかけになるので3月は好きです。

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文法ミス:

• In March.
  文頭に句読点が必要です。

• This season of graduation ceremony. I like it.
  "This season of graduation ceremony" は冗長なので、"I like graduation season." のように簡潔に表現できます。

• I can remember my old self of the most in year.
  "of the most in year" は不自然な表現です。 "most vividly" のように言い換えることができます。

• I can't got good grades in my school life.
  "can't got" は "couldn't get" に修正する必要があります。

• I was anxious about not being able to imagine what I would become in the future when I was students.
  "when I was students" は "when I was a student" に修正する必要があります。

• March is a month of reflection and growth for me, as I recall the uncertanity I faced and the actions I took to overcome it.
  "uncertanity" は "uncertainty" に修正する必要があります。

修正後

In March, I like the feeling of being surrounded by the atmosphere of graduation ceremonies. I can remember my old self most vividly in March. I couldn't get good grades in my school life, and I was anxious about not being able to imagine what I would become in the future when I was a student. I like March because remembering the anxiety I felt back then motivates me to take action.

修正稿

In March, I like the feeling of being surrounded by the atmosphere of graduation ceremonies. I can remember my old self most vividly in March.
I coudn't get good grades in my school life, and I was anxious about not being able to imagine what I would become in the future when I was a students. I like March because remembering the anxiety I felt back then motivates me to take action.

答え合わせ

3月は卒業式の雰囲気に包まれる感じが好きだ。3月になると、昔の自分を鮮明に思い出す。
学生生活では成績が上がらず、将来自分がどうなっているのか想像もつかず不安だった。3月が好きなのは、あの頃の不安を思い出すことで、行動を起こそうという気持ちになるからです。

not being able to imagine … 想像できない
what I would become in the future … 自分の将来がどうなっているか