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課題

Be insatiable in pursuing my passions.
Recentry, The abs  I've been seeing lately are all like, "For those who haven't found their passion yet!" Unfortunately, I have passion of a lot. To be precise, I often want to "quit" things.
When did advertisements become so unpleasant?

書きたい英語

やりたいことに貪欲に
最近私に表示される広告は、'やりたいことがみつからないあなたへ！'というものばかり。残念ながらやりたいことはたくさんあるんだ。厳密に言えば、'やめることをやりたい'、ことが多いけどね。
いつから広告はこんなに不快になったのだろう。

AI様のご指摘

1. 文法ミス:

   • Recentry -> Recently (スペルミス)

   • The abs -> The ads (意味が異なる)

   • I have passion of a lot -> I have a lot of passions (文法)

   • When did advertisements become so unpleasant? -> When did advertisements become so unpleasant? (文末の句読点)

   • abs -> ads (広告)

   • passion of a lot -> a lot of passions (たくさんの情熱)

   • quit -> give up (諦める)

   • unpleasant -> annoying (煩わしい)、intrusive (邪魔な)

   • "For those who haven't found their passion yet!" -> 「まだ自分の情熱を見つけていないあなたへ！」 (より自然な日本語)

   • Unfortunately, I have passion of a lot. -> 残念ながら、私はたくさんのことに情熱を持っています。 (より自然な日本語)

   • To be precise, I often want to "quit" things. -> 厳密に言えば、私はすぐに「辞めたい」と思ってしまうことが多いです。 (より自然な日本語)

   • When did advertisements become so unpleasant? -> いつから広告はこんなに煩わしい**／邪魔になったのだろう？ (より具体的な表現)

1. 修正後
   Be insatiable in pursuing my passions.
   Recently, the ads I've been seeing lately are all like, "For those who haven't found their passion yet!" Unfortunately, I have a lot of passions. To be precise, I often want to "stop doing" on things. When did advertisements become so annoying and intrusive?

修正稿

Be insatiable in pursuing my passions.
Recently, the ads I've been seeing lately are all like, "For those who haven't found their passion yet!" Unfortunately, I have a lot of passions. To be precise, I often want to "stop doing" on things. When did advertisements become so annoying and inrtusive?

答え合わせ

情熱を追い求めることに貪欲であれ。

最近、あちこちで見かける広告はどれも「まだ自分の情熱を見つけていないあなたへ！」と言わんばかりのものばかりだ。皮肉なことに、私にはたくさんの興味・関心がある。言い換えると、私は何かを始めるやいなやすぐに「諦めてしまいたい」と思うことが多い。いつから広告はこんなにも鬱陶しくてしつこくなってしまったんだろう？

なんか微妙にニュアンスが違うような…
Be insatiable….飽くなき