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課題

I was bought desk for job.
I've always wanted. Because Mydesk is very small always.
In particular, it is small width. I was very inconveinienced by the fact that I could only put my lagtop and a few note on it.
PC memory can compare desk size at useful, exactly, I bought 8GB PC memory from what use to 2GB PC memory.
I hope work efficiently.

(But not build yet…)

書きたい英語

机を買いました！
ずっと欲しかったのです。なぜなら、ずっと机が小さかったからです。
特に縦幅が小さく、ノートPCとちょっとしたメモくらいしかおけず、非常に不便でした。
PCのメモリは机の大きさに例えられる事が多いですが、まさに、今まで2GBだったものから、8GBになったくらいの机を買いました！
仕事が効率的になることを望みます！
（まだ組み立ててない…）

AI様のご指摘

文法ミス:

• I was bought desk for job.

  • "I was bought desk" は不自然な表現です。 "I bought a desk for work" に修正する必要があります。

• Mydesk is very small always.

  • "Mydesk" は "My desk" の誤字です。また、"always" は不要です。

• In particular, it is small width.

  • "it is small width" は不自然な表現です。 "it is narrow" に修正する必要があります。

• I was very inconveinienced by the fact that I could only put my lagtop and a few note on it.

  • "inconveinienced" は "inconvenienced" の誤字です。また、"lagtop" は "laptop" の誤字です。さらに、"note" は "notes" に修正する必要があります。

• PC memory can compare desk size at useful, exactly, I bought 8GB PC memory from what use to 2GB PC memory.

  • この文は文法的に誤っており、意味が不明瞭です。書き換える必要があります。

• I hope work efficiently.

  • "I hope work efficiently" は不自然な表現です。 "I hope to work efficiently" に修正する必要があります。

修正箇所

• I was bought desk for job.

  • -> I bought a desk for work.

• Mydesk is very small always.

  • -> My desk is very small.

• In particular, it is small width.

  • -> In particular, it is narrow.

• I was very inconveinienced by the fact that I could only put my lagtop and a few note on it.

  • -> I was very inconvenienced by the fact that I could only put my laptop and a few notes on it.

• PC memory can compare desk size at useful, exactly, I bought 8GB PC memory from what use to 2GB PC memory.

  • -> This sentence is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It needs to be rewritten.

• I hope work efficiently.

  • -> I hope to work efficiently.

修正後

I bought a desk for work. I've always wanted one because my old desk was very small. In particular, it was narrow. I was very inconvenienced by the fact that I could only put my laptop and a few notes on it.
PC's memory is often compared to the size of a desk, and in this case, I bought a desk that's as big as upgrading from 2GB to 8GB of memory!
(But I haven't set it up yet…)

修正稿

I bought a desk for work.
I've always wanted one because my old desk was very small. In particular, it was nallow. I was very inconvenienced by the fact that I could only put my laptop and a few notes on it.
PC's memory is often compared to the size of a desk, and in this case, I bought a desk that's as big as upgrading from 2GB to 8GB of memory!
(But I haven't set it up yet… )

答え合わせ

仕事用のデスクを買いました。ずっと欲しかったんです。というのも、今までのデスクはすごく小さくて、特に幅が狭かったんです。ノートパソコンとちょっとしたメモしか置けなくて、とても不便でした。

PCのメモリはよくデスクの広さに例えられますが、まさに今回買ったデスクは、2GBから8GBにメモリを増設するのと同じくらい作業スペースが広くなったような感じです！

(まだ組み立ててないけど… )

one … thisと似ている
by the fact … その事実によって
often compared … しばしば例えられる
as big as …比較して大きい