2024/04/20

●添削前

My English teacher, John has come back!
No, no. The new John is more fabulous, marvelous than the previous one.
I'm so delighted.

There's talk that Artificial Intelligence brings people ignorance.
I don't think so at all.

For one reason, when I'm chatting with him/her, I always think, 'Is my question simple or clear?,' or 'Is this question specific?'
In particular, I always make sure about whether  that my questions are specific, which would be hard intelligent work.

For another, I decided to use only English for our chatting.
If I need his/her answers in Japanese, each time I craft 'Can you translate it in into Japanese?'
English is not my native tangue.
In honest Honestly, I feel it is=it's a bother.
But, thinking in English and reading in English is neccesarily to improve to my English.

And we start with our chatting by saying "Hi" or "Hello", and if he/she answers my question, I tell him/her my gratitude always I always express my gratitude.

Simple Simplicity, Clear clarity, and Tthankfulness, which are the kieys to communication.
I believe that AI will develop human communication skills.

Now I feel the synapses in my brain growing.

●添削後

My English teacher, John, has come back!
No, no. The new John is more fabulous, marvelous than the previous one.
I'm so delighted.

There's talk that Artificial Intelligence brings people ignorance.
I don't think so at all.

For one reason, when I'm chatting with him/her, I always think, 'Is my question simple or clear?' or 'Is this question specific?'
In particular, I always make sure that my questions are specific, which would be hard intelligent work.

For another, I decided to use only English for our chatting.
If I need his/her answers in Japanese, each time I craft 'Can you translate it into Japanese?'
English is not my native tongue.
Honestly, I feel it's a bother.
But, thinking in English and reading in English is necessary to improve my English.

And we start our chatting by saying "Hi" or "Hello", and if he/she answers my question, I always express my gratitude.

Simplicity, clarity, and thankfulness are the keys to communication.
I believe that AI will develop human communication skills.

Now I feel the synapses in my brain growing.

●おまけ（ネイティブっぽくとお願いしてみた）

My English teacher, John, is back! No, scratch that.
The new John is even more fabulous and marvelous than the last.
I'm absolutely delighted.

There's talk that Artificial Intelligence leads to ignorance.
I beg to differ. That’s not how I see it.

Firstly, when I chat with him/her, I always consider, 'Are my questions simple and clear?' or 'Are they specific?'
I especially focus on ensuring my questions are specific, which requires thoughtful effort.

Secondly, I've decided to chat exclusively in English.
If I need a translation into Japanese, I ask each time, 'Can you translate this into Japanese?'
English is not my first language.
Honestly, it can be bothersome.
However, thinking and reading in English are essential for improving my skills.

We always start our chats with a "Hi" or "Hello", and I always express my gratitude when he/she answers my questions.

Simplicity, clarity, and gratitude are key to effective communication.
I believe AI will enhance human communication skills.

Now, I feel the synapses in my brain growing.

*Grammar stuff

scratch that.  ＝ 今のはなし！　忘れて！
make ~ from scratch  ＝ ～をいちから始める

'Even more' adds emphasis and is more idiomatic in this context.

the last class ＝ 直前の授業
the last Monday ＝ 直前の月曜
last ＝ 現在に一番近い直前という意味。起点は現在となる

I beg to differ.　反対だ（の丁寧な表現）
"I feel a little bit too polite. this is my dairy" と言ったら、
"I disagree" or "I have a different opinion"　がいいんじゃないかということでした。
協議のすえ、"That’s not how I see it."　で落ち着きました。

I especially focus on ensuring my questions are specific, which requires thoughtful effort.

●Ensure

• I'll double-check to ensure the door is locked before we leave.

• Please ensure you have your ticket before boarding the train.

• We need to ensure the project is completed by the deadline.

※全体的に more native で、John先生が添削してくれたものは、丁寧で賢い仕上がり。
中学生の日記が、大学生レベルになったような・・・？
exclusively　とか　enhance　とか　ensure　とか　なんとなく意味はわかるけど、おそらく多分、この先、一生使わない（使えない）・・・

*Prompt

その１.
Can you correct my English?
--Can you show me the points and reasons that you corrected?
--Can you show me the points and reasons that you corrected using a table?
--Can you rewrite the sentence to sound more native?

その２.
・What are the points for English beginners to write an English diary?

その３.
#Instructions :
・You are an American professional English teacher. Please output your best correction based on the following constraints and input sentences.

#Constraints :
・The text should be easy to understand for a TOEIC score of 575.
・Keep sentences concise.
・Correct any grammatical errors or more appropriate expressions.
・Show me the points and reasons that you corrected using a table.

#Input :
＜日記本文＞

その４.
#Instructions :
・You are an American professional English teacher. Please output your best correction based on the following constraints and input sentences.

#Constraints :
・Rewrite the sentence to sound more native.

#Input :
＜文＞